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Curse Eater thoughts
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Inspired by Quinn’s Rock Lee plurk
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Sabra is ostensibly the main character
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(Though I certainly hope the rest of the party gets plenty of focus and cool moments)
Neo Quinn
(they will)
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Right now, Sabra has the nebulous goal of “get strong enough to protect everyone”
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The problem with that is
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That was Kurosaki Ichigo’s goal
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And Ichigo got really fucking flat and boring later on in the story because he didn’t have any motivation for staying involved in the story beyond “if I don’t Aizen-” or whoever “-will kill all my friends”
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he's reactive instead of active
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Ichigo’s main contemporaries, Luffy and Naruto, both had very concrete goals
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Luffy: find one piece and become the pirate king
Naruto: become hokage so my village acknowledges my worth
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So if I want Sabra to really shine she’s gotta have some kind of goal like that
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So what I’m thinking is
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Nadia the immaculate is the strongest Curse Eater, and someone who Sabra I think has a bit of a fangirl crush on
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What if I rework that slightly
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Nadia actually had an interaction with Sabra
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Nadia was like
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In some way she either said or implied that someone like Sabra could never be the strongest curse eater
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And Sabra went “OH YEAH?”
Neo Quinn
hmm
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it's workable, but may need some massaging from an NPC characterization standpoint
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I don’t know if that’s ic for Nadia
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first question is, what is 'someone like Sabra' lacking
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ostensibly
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that makes her unable to reach the peak
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is she just untalented? are her powers apparently limited in some way
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Well maybe just for a start
Echo
Would it potentially be more IC if Nadia was like... genuinely well-meaning and nice, but in a way that unfortunately wound up being kind of condescending?
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Nadia is super high class and Sabra is a feral little gremlin
Echo
Sort of an 'oh sweetie, you don't have to worry about this fight, I'm going to take care of everything' vibe.
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But Maybe it wasn’t an insult so much as a challenge
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I'm not sure that social class or elegance are something that the beasts templar put much faith in
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“You think you belong up here with me?”
Neo Quinn
since Sacheverel is on the Top Three and he's also a disgusting goblin man
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prove it
ArtIsArt
You could also kind of pull a MHA, like have her admire/compete/want to be that good or better?
Neo Quinn
that does sound more like Nadia
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aspirational rather than deprecating
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rather than "you can't be as strong as me", you could get a similarly powerful motivation from "you can be as strong as me"
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Maybe someone ELSE in the top ranks told Sabra she sucks
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the other route to go would be if someone other than Nadia was the deprecating one yeah
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a different Sun
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but that route does benefit from Sabra having something actually holding her back - lack of talent, unstable powers due to weird heart implant, etc
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I think Sacheveral would be on the same wavelength as Sabra so probably not him
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that she can then overcome through effort and guts
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Her powers ARE pretty unstable
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Nadia is kind of reminiscent of All Might in that, and I'm not sure if Sabra is consciously aware of this,
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if you want to go that route I can give you a Sun who might be an asshole to Sabra in backstory
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If something happens to her there's absolutely nobody on her level to pick up the slack
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become the Beast Templar's pillar of support
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But an insanely aspirational goal might be "I want to be someone that Nadia can rely on"
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That would be cool
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We don't know much about Sabras pre George life but you could give her a sort of relatable anecdote
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I like the idea of Nadia desperately searching for someone who could beat her if she fell
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Like, "I thought my parents were the strongest people in the world when I was seven and then dad got kicked by an ox and was laid up in bed and I had to do all this stuff around the house to make up for him and it was scary but also I felt really strong"
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On the down low
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She’s an orphan but
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Something like that maybe
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I like not knowing exact canon of what is going through Nadias head but given her situation as the worlds strongest curse eater
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I would personally be concerned if I had a chance of turning into an unstoppable monster
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Yeah it makes sense as something a normal person in that situation would be worried about but Nadia isn’t a normal person
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So who knows
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One thing most go to shounen protags have is a defining childhood moment that you can look back at and go "oh that's why he's like that"
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sends you some options on disco
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Josuke and his pompa
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Pompadour*
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Deku watching All Might's video and asking his mom if he can be a hero, Naruto alone on the swings as the rest of his ninja class celebrates with their parents, Ichigo and Grand Fisher, Luffy knifing himself in the face in like panel one
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Josuke and the pomp
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I'd say Luffy crying while being rescued by Shanks minus one arm
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is more his big formative panel
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True, that's a good panel
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Two possibilities occurred to me while clocking out of work
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1: Sabra remembers her parents’ deaths
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When she was like 4 years old
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2: a tragedy involving Sabra (10 years old), her pet rabbit, and an over the top anime bully/sociopath
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Both are pretty dark, potentially, but this is a dark story
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In either case, someone stronger than Sabra took someone from her that she loved
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God, what if both?
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And then for a third time, some asshole in the top ten casually took something/someone from her too
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And she had a low point of “no matter what I do there’s always someone who can just take it away from me with brute strength”
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And then Nadia was like “If you want it to stop, you can”
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“Just get on my level scrublord”
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(Paraphrased)
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2. It doesn't even have to be a proper sociopath - fitting the kind of story this is, it could just be that she has a rabbit she loves very much and it's a harsh winter and the boss orphan of whatever pecking order she is in goes
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"We're all starving and I am making a decision for our own good and if you don't like it you can get stronger than me and take over"
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Or possibly something less blatant to make the Nadia incident stand out as the star and endpoint
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I think it being a matter of survival kind of dilutes the moment
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The big thing I’m getting is Sabra fucking loathes bullies
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