而我今天上線上家教課,發現我幫小班想的隊呼有問題!!! "Water can drink, Water can swim, Water can take a shower, Water can brush your teeth, Water can wash your hands! Don’t waste water!
家教老師和我討論出兩個新隊呼: A. I can drink the water I can swim in the water I can take a shower using water I can wash my hands with water I can brush my teeth with water Don't waste water
B. Water, water, water,water Water is important I can drink it I can swim in it I can take a shower in it I can wash my hands in it I can brush my teeth in it So don't waste water
Water can be drunk, Water can be swum, Water can be taken as a shower, Water can rinse your teeth, Water can clean your hands! Don’t waste water! 這樣跟原本夠像,小孩應該比較容易改吧?
最近學校在如火如荼的練習美語歌曲比賽!小班的主題是水;中班是顏色;大班是躲避球!
而我今天上線上家教課,發現我幫小班想的隊呼有問題!!!
"Water can drink,
Water can swim,
Water can take a shower,
Water can brush your teeth,
Water can wash your hands!
Don’t waste water!
Music please"
上面的隊呼犯了一個文法的錯誤,大家可以猜猜看!
A.
I can drink the water
I can swim in the water
I can take a shower using water
I can wash my hands with water
I can brush my teeth with water
Don't waste water
Water, water, water,water
Water is important
I can drink it
I can swim in it
I can take a shower in it
I can wash my hands in it
I can brush my teeth in it
So don't waste water
開頭換A
開頭換B
不改,維持舊版
我外人來看,感覺改正會比較好,怕會有家長聽到會介意,但我不清楚要再教小班新東西有多難。
A 跟 B,我比較喜歡 B,有詩歌的感覺。
What can you drink? Water!
Where can you swim? Water!
...等等,我覺得就沒有語意問題,唸起來也有節奏感
water can be drunk?
Water can be swum,
Water can be taken as a shower,
Water can rinse your teeth,
Water can clean your hands!
Don’t waste water!
這樣跟原本夠像,小孩應該比較容易改吧?
"water can drink" 沒有「文法錯誤」,但是「語意錯誤」。
參考:
Drink the water.
Swim in water.
Shower under water.
Brush teeth with water.
Wash hands using water.
原本想要回覆,因為地震忘記了