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Corporal Acting Captain Leonides of the Star Hawks space marine legion, 10th company, reporting for duty
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This is NOT a warhammer 40,000 thing it’s much sillier than that
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Initial pitch here
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I’m just gonna start saying words here
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Setting pitch: in ancient times, the legendary homeworld of humanity, “Earth”, was lost to a horrifying plague of demons that have ever since been slowly spreading across the galaxy
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Fighting them is the mighty Galactic Empire, which counters the sinister corruptive power of the forces of Chaos with a combination of unshakable dogmatic purity of mind, and overwhelming firepower.
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Once, the Empire was the light of hope for the galaxy. There are even old tales of heroes with miraculous powers who could fight demons on their own terms and win
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None of that power has been seen for thousands of years
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Most people assume it’s just fantasy at this point
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The light of hope the Empire once stood for has grown dim, it’s armies fight battles on a thousand fronts, and life has been ground down to little more than a desperate struggle to survive one more day
Cute Quinn
oh I like that
Cute Quinn
so Magic has existed before
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At the forefront of this war, the tip of the Empire’s spear, stand the Space Marines, transhuman warriors rebuilt from the ground up to be unstoppable killing machines full of cybernetic implants and bionic upgrades
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Armed with the most powerful weapons available, their lives are just an endless cycle of fighting and flying to the next desperate fight
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Cute Quinn : magic is powered by hope, and the Empire lost hope a long time ago
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So they can’t use it
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But a few years ago, a dim radio signal was picked up from a distant star, along with a faint scent of demonic influence
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A small detachment of marines was sent to check it out
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What they found was a splinter colony, so long cut off from the rest of humanity that they thought themselves alone in the universe
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They had lost the hyper tech that was humanity’s birthright, but had built themselves back up to a simple industrial society (so roughly 21st century, from our perspective)
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The powers of Chaos were here, but in a somewhat...reduced form
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As the marines prepared to make planet fall and neutralize the threat, however, a second ship arrived. A ship of corrupted soldiers who had traded their souls for dark power
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There was a battle in orbit that resulted in both ships being destroyed
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But the Imperial ship was able to launch a single escape pod, containing two elite space marine warriors and one engineer
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And the chaos ship scattered a few demonic relics onto the planet below
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With his entire company dead, freshly promoted Corporal Leonides has been promoted again as the leader of the entire imperial force on the planet
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The people here are lackadaisical in their lives. Weak. Vulnerable
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They have no idea what horrors the universe has in store for them
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Leonides may be cut off from reinforcements, but these people are humans so he will fight to the death to protect them
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But
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The conflict here is...weird
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Chaos existed here already and it was no less potent than anywhere else but something was keeping it in check
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Demons would appear to corrupt human souls but they were curiously eccentric demons, taking unusually human forms
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And, stranger still, they were being fought by...young girls who wielded a power out of legend
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A beautiful light that could fight demonic entities and even, unbelievably, restore the soul of a corrupted human
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A feat never before achieved in the entire history of the Galactic Empire
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For real TL;DR this time: space marines learn to respect the infinite power of MAGICAL GIRLS
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https://imgs.plurk.com/QD4/rfd/PVR4qGOLSZxW6m6tRz9kJCtIYcV_lg.jpg https://imgs.plurk.com/QD4/3XL/HX0DinKjQFNZfrh6oPIZ7UyuLKQ_lg.jpg they become friends
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So Leonides
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- Technically immortal (or at least ageless, he can definitely still be killed), but still very young for his post
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He’s like
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30
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He’ll still be kicking in 300 years but for now he’s still living in a human time frame
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- was selected at a very young age to be a space marine. He literally does not remember civilian life
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Been training for like 20 years
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Training/fighting
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- earned an early promotion that a lot of his battle siblings (while I think all the marines on this planet are boys, in this setting there ARE female marines) think he doesn’t necessarily deserve
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He rallied a squad of regular soldiers who’s morale had been shattered and was able to lead a charge to retake an anti air gun that was preventing reinforcements from landing
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Just generally showed leadership qualities, so he’s been fasttracked a bit towards command, but not everyone is convinced he’ll get very far
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- when I say he doesn’t remember civilian life that is not ENTIRELY true
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He still vaguely remembers playing some kind of game with friends
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Or eating dinner with his family
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Scattered things
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- he’s worried that these unnecessary memories are limiting his potential as a marine
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What if a demon uses this weakness to isolate him from his siblings???
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He must be EXTRA STRONG AND TOUGH AND DETERMINED so that doesn’t happen
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Capabilities
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- trained in the art of killing things really really quickly with ruthless precision and enthusiasm
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- trained in advanced battle tactics and strategic planning
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- conditioned to keep himself together no matter how dark and hopeless the situation gets
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He could be facing an entire planet of demons with nothing but a sharp stick. He’d die, but he’d die on his feet working doggedly towards his goal
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- physical strength, toughness, speed massively upgraded
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Even without any gear he could flip a car over, survive injuries that would kill most humans, shrug off all but the most deadly toxins and diseases, and sprint at like thirty miles an hour
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- cybernetic implants let him interface with his gear, improving his accuracy with guns and giving him full diagnostic readouts on his armor’s condition. He has a HUD, basically
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- power armor is largely invulnerable to any weapon from this planet that isn’t demonic in nature
Cute Quinn
since these marines are less physical hulking monstrosities than 40K's marines, I'm imagining something a bit less https://images.plurk.com/3odwcspqZw83Odz2uKo0ym.jpg and a bit more https://images.plurk.com/5Vw4bQ90HmruY0olkdSBYi.jpg
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Like if you nuked him that would do the trick but any weapon that a human being could reasonably carry will do minimal damage at best
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It also massively augments his strength and speed even more, and acts as a completely sealed environment suit
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Using cars as ranged weapons is practical in his suit
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But why would he use cars as ranged weapons when he has his series twelve auto guass rifle
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The XII is the weapon of choice for marines across the galaxy due to its reliable construction and ability to use improvised ammunition
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The bullets are just lumps of metal
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Accelerated to ten times the speed of sound
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With pin point accuracy and reasonably high rate of fire
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An unaugmented human using this gun would probably end up with broken bones after firing it once
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There are specialized ammunition types for the series XII but we have limited amounts of it here
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For enemies that get in arm’s reach, he sports just a big knife
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If Nanjao picked it up it’d feel more like a sword
Princess Emily
still a goal: have my Girl pick up a marine gun and then laugh evilly
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Excellent
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She’s magic she’s reinforced enough to handle it
Cute Quinn
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What Leonides is dealing with today
[1080p]Tropical-Rouge Precure Opening 1
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He’s like 6’7 and built like a linebacker
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huge, but still believably a normal human
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Though he does need to wear long sleeves to pass as normal since his arms and legs have neural implant ports for improving reaction speed by directly interfering with power armor
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MundersOWundus magnet : any thoughts you’d like to add or things you’d like to change?
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Leonides HAS tearfully dueled his siblings to the death because they were corrupted
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Corruption is not something he takes lightly
MundersOWundus
I'll respond to this with more on Technologian Diane Aggripa this afternoon after the playtest I'm doin
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roger
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Further random thoughts:
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Since we have two space marines
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- Two space marines can take on a corrupted human with little difficulty
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- Two space marines can take on a corrupted marine but the odds of getting hurt in the process are much higher
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- Two space marines can take on a true demon if they have been briefed on the demon's capabilities and personality ahead of time and go into the fight with a plan but even that is risky
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- I picture the first time they encounter Emily's character they try to kill her and get curb stomped because they under estimated her
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but like non-fatally because that's how chaos rolls here
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Captain Leonides blasting off again.....
Lightning Bolt
oh this sounds like it'll be a delicious story
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The basic idea is
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- Magical girls teach space marines how to have fun and about joy and hope
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- Space marines teach magical girls about duty and remaining steadfast in the face of overwhelming odds and ADVANCED BATTLE TACTICS
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Together, they form a team that can save the day
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and form bonds of mutual respect despite their wildly different styles
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
I imagine one of the defining moments is like
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a monster of the week that is EXTREMELY zippy
the girls could purify it but their finisher takes too long to charge
the marines can nail it with gunfire but they can't purify it, just kill it
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so they work together for the first time by the marines pinning the monster in place with gunfire to give the girls time to charge and aim their finisher
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stuff like that, yes
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The two big juicy plot points I have in mind
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is when one of the Marines gets corrupted
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and Leonides is like tearfully preparing to kill his closest friend on this planet
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And Nanjiao is like "Wait hold on don't give up that easily. We can still save him!"
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And Leonides cautiously accepts that maybe there is still hope
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And then, later
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The Dark Queen has fuckin' completed her plan and enacted end game
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Which the magical girls were always told was the game over scenario
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so they're tearfully preparing for the end
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And Leonides is like "If it doesn't matter what we do at this point then I'm gonna keep fighting anyway. Maybe there's still a way."
magnet
hmmmmm what if my muhreen... was a girl
because hee hoo violent space viking chainaxe lady
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and Nanjiao cautiously accepts that
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maybe there's still hope
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We DO allow lady marines in this setting
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okay. hear me out.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
a two-episode arc.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
where the first episode: the girls can't hit a monster
so leonides, grabs the monster and pins it in place by holding it like piccolo. he has no idea what it'll do to him, since he's not corrupted, but he's telling the girls to take the shot anyway.
magnet
the magical girls teach her about pretty dresses and tea parties in one of the less dramatic episodes
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second episode: leonides wasn't corrupted, so all the finisher did to him was just make him really relaxed.
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and now he's just sort of.
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(And then between the dramatic shit, you have filler episodes where the marines have to like learn how to bake cakes and stuff)
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vibing. ultra relaxed. NO idea how to deal with the feeling of Being Relaxed.
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Magnet's marine like "WHAT DID YOU DO TO HIM!?!?!?!?"
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"ANSWER ME, WITCH"
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
anyway i just made a superhero verse so i'm not joining in this one i just wanna point out one thing i realized from your worldbuilding
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if magic comes from hope, and the empire lost hope long ago, and the two sides are learning from each other
it's ENTIRELY possible the climax of the show involves one of the marines becoming a magical girl/boy themselves.
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The actual ending we discussed is
Cute Quinn
the actual climax we have in mind is that magic is restored to the whole galaxy
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because they have Re-Learned how to Hope
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Everyone becomes magic
Cute Quinn
a whole empire of mahous
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
oh that's also incredibly good
Cute Quinn
to purify Chaos in a new paradigm
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Leonides doesn't get a cute and frilly magical boy outfit but like
magnet
okok lets go
Berserker-Sgt Freyja of the Drakkar Legion
Berserker in the more historical sense of a top champion (melee) fighter more than the pop-cultural sense of uncontrollable battlerage, she still uses sound tactics, but she does have a bad habit of going for battle-glory over following orders
fights with a chainaxe and .75-caliber sidearm
Cute Quinn
I like the marines all having more historical Earthlike names and the magical girls all having weirdo space names
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his power armor, which is beat to hell at that point, comes out of the transformation in perfect condition and covered with silver and gold highlights
Cute Quinn
the Galactic Empire is more closely tied to Terra
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They REMEMBER Earth
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They know where it is and can still go there
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In theory
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In practice anyone who tries to go to the sol system gets ripped apart by demons
magnet
Freyja's armor has shoulder spikes and a beast-pelt cape + decorative warpaint-type designs
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magnet : I cautiously came up with the legion name of "Star Hawks" earlier but I'm not sold on that because it's a LITTLE silly sounding
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I was trying to hit something that hit the same feel as like
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Blood Ravens
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Luna Wolves
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etc
magnet
oh I was figuring they were from different legions but I guess maybe not if they were on the same battlebarge when it got shot down
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yeah that was my thought
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But I'm not married to it
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We could both be Star Hawks or both be Drakkar or be one of each
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whatever's clever
magnet
ye I was going for mine being from like the equivalent of Space Wolves or maybe Storm Wardens
magnet
maybe it was like a joint operation where her legion lent a few squads to the Star Hawks
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something like that works
Cute Quinn
I guess it depends on whether you want them to already know each other at the start or not
magnet
or a Deathwatch type of situation with a mixed squad
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I think they knew each other but not super well
magnet
also I'm still amused by my idea of calling the hellportal where Earth used to be the Eye of Terra
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Like they'd been working together for this operation which had gone on for a few weeks before the crash
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The Star Hawks are a lot more focused on like precision strikes. They use drop pods extensively
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They Drakkar I imagine are more like siege breakers
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They lead assaults from the ground
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also Star Hawk colors: Blue and Bronze
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Space Marines do not wear camo they are walking battle standards
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They want to stand out on the battlefield to encourage their allies and strike fear into their enemies
magnet
yeah I figured Star Hawks are a more 'normal' style of legion like ultramarines or blood ravens and Freyja comes from a gimmickier one that would have a separate codex
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yeah
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Star Hawks are codex
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Cute Quinn : I missed your comment comparing them to Master Chief and I think they're somewhere inbetween Astares and Spartans in stature
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yeah
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Oh the other little note I had is that Leonides sidearm is a laser pistol
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Slower rate of fire than Freyja's slug thrower but more accurate
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similar stopping power
MundersOWundus
So, Technologian Diane Aggripa
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Engineer of the Marine detatchment, installed two additional arms and goggles for convenience
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Treats archaeotech with religious awe that's honestly kind of odd for the Technologian Order, which usually has no truck with Superstitious Nonsense
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Meanwhile, she will take copious notes on Superstitious Nonsense that seems to be replicable under lab conditions
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for example
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Magic
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installed a voicebox, can do bill wurtz vocalizations on command, very gender
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asks you to please bring back your armor and equipment in one peice in an exasperated Q voice
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"No promises"
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"But I'll ask the forces of darkness if they could kill me without damaging my armor."
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(This is what passes for jokes with space marines)
magnet
Freyja's armor probably gets dinged up even more
magnet
being the melee fighter
magnet
her like "what's the point of armor if it doesn't take some hits for you" while picking demonflesh out of the teeth of her chainaxe
ReJenerator
Leonidas gets the power of hope again, and his armor turns from green to blue, and unfurls a cape from nowhere (made of magic) and his laser pistol suddenly develops a new setting: "Purification".
ReJenerator
(as opposed to the positron rifle my character Eiko has, which has a way to push the slider to a level marked "VOID WARRANY")
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Lenoides*
ReJenerator
also Diana Agrippa may have a weapon that's been marked with a setting of "Do Not Use Without Reconstruction After This".
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Cape is strong tho
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White and gold armor with a cape
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And I don't think he actually does any magic of his own he just, like
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joins forces with everyone else charging up the big final beam attack
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Then LATER, presumably, he will figure out how his own magic works
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but that's after the end of the story
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he doesn't do magic, he just channels the power into his items, and can also use it to charge others. Without his gear or his team, he's a Space Marine in underwear. With gear, or with his team he's Crunch of the Mighty Orbots.
ReJenerator
...who was the power supply and in one episode detaches to eat an asteroid to power up the entire robot.
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that reference went over my head but yeah probably something like that
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yeah, I forgot how old I am sometimes.
ArtIsArt
I am happy to develop my OC more.
Cute Quinn
I'm playing Nanjiao, the chief representative of the mahou side of the setting
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All magical girl setting questions shall be fielded by Quinn
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