有沒有人可以幫我看一下我的英文自我介紹，丟網路上的翻譯器感覺不太準
可以給你2個噗幣

seal9349: I like to interact with others, and I actively participate in some internal and external activities during my studies, and often travel to different schools with my tutors, which helps me expand my horizons and learn more communication skills.

我本身比較喜歡與他人互動，就學期間會主動參與一些校內外活動也常與導師前往不同學校研習，這有助於我拓展自身視野，和學到更多與人溝通的技巧。

I usually like to draw, and through painting, I develop my patience and carefulness, and it also allows me to capture details better. I also received a drawing commission myself, and I learned how to price and deliver on time in the process of receiving the commission. These two things helped me improve my sensitivity to money and my ability to allocate time

我平時喜歡繪畫通過繪畫培養自己的耐心和細心，也讓我更能捕捉細節。我本身也有在接畫畫的委託，在接委託的過程中學到了如何定價和按時交稿。這兩件事有助於我提升對金錢的敏感度和時間分配的能力

先問一下這英文自介是用在哪方面的，我再看一下比較formal還是改成比較imformal

seal9349: 大學面試

我喜歡與他人互動，改成
I am a socialize person

我看第一段時會覺得喜歡與他人互動這邊，似乎沒有很具體的例子
參加活動和研習可能不一定有很跟人互動，也許需要噗主再補一兩句怎麼喜歡跟人互動？或是跟人互動遇到價值觀不同時，自己會怎麼處理？

另外學按時交稿
這個技能用
time management 比較好

有點中式英文，一下子要改不知道怎麼下手

I am a socialize and communicative person. Throughout my academic years, I participated both campus activities and extracurricular activities. Also, I attended different seminars with my tutors. Those activities improved my communication skills and widen my horizon.

也參考了旅人的建議

seal9349: 哦哦哦哦哦旅人的更好

校外活動是 高雄市經濟發展局舉辦的公民咖啡廳
（但怕很難唸所以沒加進去

哇幹我剛剛還刪掉我打的，因為我覺的seal9349旅人的更好 這樣我噗幣收的很愧疚，我再弄一次好了

seal9349: 謝謝旅人 剩下面那段了

I'm a socialize and active person. During my studies, I participated several events, including (校內活動一個) in school and The world Cafe' held by 高雄 Economic Development Bureau. I also attend several workshops (或是用seminars) at other school with my tutor. These experiences borden my views and improved my communication skills.

My hobby is drawing. Drawing made me became a patient and carful and person. It also improves my skill of capturing details. I also received drawing cases from time to time. It helps me develop time management and pricing skills as I need to arrange case by their priority and difficuties.

我用我的方式寫，所以還是不太一樣，最後我加了一句 「因為我需要按照優先度、難度排委託的順序」，因為感覺有點空？

先說我的英文就......雅思常年5分，只是在國外待的久，大概有個感覺而已，噗主參考看看

另外教你小技巧，機翻雖然很死，但如果你丟單字去翻譯，有時候會看到不錯的例句，就可以拿來用

Painting is one of my hobbies. In my free time, I enjoy painting. Painting cultivates my patience ,carefulness and nuance capturing.

Furthermore, I am a freelance illustrator. By possessing several years experience as a freelance illustrator, it improved my time management skills and sensitivity of market price.

下半段大約這樣（？

nori5819: 有講得出來應該教授就會給過吧，相信旅人

嘿對，有講出來是重點

噗主加油！！！！！！
一切順利！！！！

另外我個人的感覺是seal9349旅人翻譯的部分比較沒漏東西，我的翻譯我會省略部份東西（像是校內外我就沒提，用舉例取代）

祝噗主面試順利！