Minor quibble: I believe that this is from the original pitch document (“Hey publisher, this is the kind of game we’d like to make, please give us money”) rather than a design document (“Fellow developers, this is the game we’ll be making”)
there's plenty of reprehensible stuff that's already been commented on but the word nipple-age makes me uneasy because you're trying to adjective a noun and failing so hard
thanks, tsr
nipple-age
makes me uneasy because you're trying to adjective a noun and failing so hard