Hello! Everyone. My name is OOO. I live in OOO. In the past, I used to be late for school almost everday,but I do not now. Because the distance between my home and the school is very far. I have to get up early to take the school bus. However, the thing caused me to surffer from the sleep deprivation.
Bus Time is usually The Best Sleeping Time. Every morning I get on the bus then I fall asleep. And I will listen to music during taking the bus. I love music. I like to listen to music, play the music games, and even starting to learn how to play the instrument. My favorite Rock Band is from Japan that is named OOO.
In my eyes, their LIVE are always the Greatest. There is nothing comparable to them. All of their members have their own charm. And the coolest one is the drummer, OOO. I admire him and hope I can be a person just like him. That’s all. Thank you!
Hello everyone! I'm OOO and live in OOO. I was late for school every morning but now I am not. As I live far away from school, I need to wake up early and take the school bus.
Hello Everyone! My name is OOO. I live in OOO. In the past, I almost lated for school everday, but now I never late again. I used to be late was because of the distance from my home to the school is too far, so I needed to got up early to catched the school bus. However, this caused me surffered by the sleep deprivation.
Hello Everyone! My name is OOO. I live in OOO. Before I come to this school, I almost lated everday, but now I never late again. Because the distance from my home to this school is quite far, so now I need to got up early to catch the school bus. However, this change cause me surffered by the sleep deprivation.
Bus driving time is usually the best period for extending sleep. Every morning after I get on the bus, I will fall asleep immediately. Also I will listen to music while taking the bus. I love to listen to music, so I play the music games, and even starting to learn the instrument. My favorite Rock Band is a Japanese band which is called OOO.
In my opinion, their live show are always the best, there is nothing to compare with. Each members of the band have their own charming point. And I think the coolest one is the drummer, OOO. I am admiring to him and wish I could become just like him. That’s all, nice to meet you, thank you for listening.
Hello everyone! I'm OOO and live in OOO. Since I live far away from school, I need to wake up earlier and catch the school bus. I used to be late for school every morning, but now I will never being late.
However, it caused my lack of sleep. I always fall asleep on the bus as soon as possible, which is my BEST sleeping space.
If I want to keep myself up, I would listen to music during travel. I LOVE it so much. I also love to playing music games and learn different music instruments.
My favorite Band is OOO which is a Japanese rock band.
I see their LIVE as the greatest show because they are the best one. Each members has his/her personal charisma. I think the coolest one should be the drummer, OOO. I really admire him and would like to be someone like him. Thank you for your time!
打了一篇稿想麻煩旅人們看有沒有什麼語句不通順的地方
因為字數問題噗主會分段放在留言
先推薦一個粗淺的文法檢查網站
有些錯字跟文法錯誤我試著修正看看
好怕唸完不到3分鐘QQ
（絕對不是改成合格作文的品質工作量太大我懶）修改到這裡有點不太明白……前後句好像不太能理解……
為什麼早起了趕校巴，但噗主還是經常遲到？遲到是以前的問題，所以現在是因為早起了所以才沒有遲到？
感覺這樣邏輯比較順噗主參考看看
以前因為學校近所以常常晚起導致遲到
現在到了新學校，為了搭校巴開始早起
旅人的句子感覺唸起來比我的通順很多
However, it caused my lack of sleep. I always fall asleep on the bus as soon as possible, which is my BEST sleeping space.
My favorite Band is OOO which is a Japanese rock band.