Dr. BeardoPuff
Me, in class: "This sonnet by Edna St. Vincent Millay is about the art of writing poetry."
My students, in their essays: "The speaker writes about her husband."
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Me, in class: "Shakespeare is pointing out the falseness of poetic language. If a person really had snow-white skin, eyes that glowed like the sun, and hovered above the earth, they wouldn't be a person; they'd be a supernatural being and probably terrify the viewer."
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My students, in their essays: "Shakespeare points out all of the flaws of his mistress and really degrades her."
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Me, in class: This is how you should create a works cited entry. Here's what it should look like. Here are examples of what cites from the book look like. You can copy and paste my examples and just change the author's name, titles, and page numbers to be yours.
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My students, in their essays: What is a works cited entry.
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Me, in class: This sonnet is addressed to a fair young man.
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My students, in their essays: Shakespeare shows how beautiful this woman is.
curby&coughing
im surprised you haven't gone totally crazy at this point, unless this is your logged decent into madness
Dr. BeardoPuff
It is.
Dr. BeardoPuff
Me in class: "Here is my example essay. Let's go through it to discuss how I crafted an argument. Remember, an argument has to be arguable. You can't just point out that something exists. You have to make a claim about it."
Dr. BeardoPuff
My students: "This poem has enjambment in it."
curby&coughing
h... has what??
Dr. BeardoPuff
A thing I didn't teach my students because it's... not what I want in this class. It's a specific feature of (some) poetry.
Dr. BeardoPuff
Enjambment is when a line of poetry does not complete its idea at the end of a line, but instead carries a thought across the line break.
Dr. BeardoPuff
Sometimes this is very pronounced, sometimes it's not. The example I always turn to are the first lines of The Wasteland when I need to define enjambment.
Dr. BeardoPuff
April is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Dr. BeardoPuff
breeding, mixing, stirring -- these words are all enjambed as they're beginning new thoughts at the end of a line, which really places a lot of strange emphasis on them.
Dr. BeardoPuff
The end of the 4th line is not enjambed, however. It concludes with a period.
curby&coughing
oh! neat
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