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I donโ€™t disagree, but it still feels a bit...platitude-y
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Yeah... The writing could use some work and "what do you need" filed down to a personality quiz? Ech...
Max
Man I'm normally like, really into this kind of rambling aesthetic stuff, but this quiz just goes so hard into it that it stops making sense
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I can see how it could be touching, but....I dunno, maybe Iโ€™m just jaded
Max
Nah I get it
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Nah, you're not jaded, this is just... not a fitting subject for a quiz and just... meh writing paired with it.
WereAwoo
...good lord quiz writer who hurt you
WereAwoo
there's a reason things like this tend to be more nonspecific
WereAwoo
I think the reason that you feel so offput by this is that it starts out sounding like you're a JRPG protag right after the "villain won" moment
WereAwoo
these sorts of things don't need to sound so incredibly bleak to get going, nor try to be quite so personal
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Scuse me though, Iโ€™m gonna go track down a villain for my bleak Protag moment /shot
WereAwoo
XDD
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