Gabiluzbad
okay I have the concept for a cast that could use a pack of weird sword lesbians and I know you can’t resist those words in that order
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
fuck
Gabiluzbad
In a cyberpunk western about people who use outdated weapons inspired by Rurouni Kenshin and Trigun
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And maybe a dash of Cowboy Bebop
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Still at work so I’ll be slow
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This is building on a previous plurk
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About a world where someone invented the autosword, a weapon that can hijack your nervous system and let you swordfight with superhuman reflexes and skill even if you have no experience with the blade
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The autosword is so effective at cutting bullets out of the air that Guns have become largely obsolete
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Or at least they’ve become a niche weapon in war rather than the main weapon for every soldier
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There was a big war about ten years ago that was the first war where the autosword saw heavy usage
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And it changed the face of warfare forever
La Comtesse
Let me get my PDF of TSL out and look for ideas
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
question: what happens when two autosword users fight? is it evenly matched, or are some autoswords better than others, or does it depend on the physique of the user, or?
Quinneapolis
I imagine it depends on the skill, strength, and autosword quality of the users
Gabiluzbad
But there were two legendary soldiers on opposite sides, one who had a normal ass sword and out fought autoswords, and one who was a famous gunslinger who beat autoswords with clever trick shots
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ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ : Quinneapolis : there are different software packs for different fighting styles and such. Physique comes into it. You can get implants that speed up your reaction times even more. Etc etc
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But like personal skill has very little to do with autoswords, normally
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Anyway
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The guy with a regular sword is our hero
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The war was a while ago
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Our hero has returned home to his father’s dojo where he learned this crazy sword style that lets him fight autoswords
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But when he gets home he finds out that his father’s school is being run by his father’s friend
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And it’s become a laughing stock
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So he shows up and finds out that this guy
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This fucking guy
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Has built up a class of all girls so he can hit on them and be the obnoxious dirty old man at them all
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So he immediately kicks the guy’s ass and chases him off
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Leaving him as the owner of a school with a garbage reputation teaching a skill that’s entirely obsolete
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To a bunch of weird girls who are the type of people to actually be interested in a worthless obsolete skill
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In a town out in the middle of nowhere
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And it was supposed to end their with a quiet life but then SOME KIND OF PLOT I HAVENT WORKED OUT YET HAPPENS
Quinneapolis
if I'm gonna make a sword lesbian for this it's gotta be a NEW kind of sword lesbian
Gabiluzbad
Involving a bunch of super dangerous people from the past showing up to try and relive the glory days
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oh I want in on this I think
Quinneapolis
I'm gonna let this simmer
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And probably corporate bullshit
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Main guy is like mid 30s and extremely uninterested in hitting on his students
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Because his students are CHILDREN
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And grownups don’t get to or want to have relationships with CHILDREN
Princess Emily
I'm gonna let this simmer too
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Looking at you Watsuki
Quinneapolis
as a baseline my brain is saying
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female himbo
Quinneapolis
strong, hot, really stupid, believes in yourself
Princess Emily
My immediate thought returned to "man I miss playing Emiko" then "I wonder what'd happen if somebody with her personality was in this"
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I've got an idea for a girl who's sleepy and on the surface largely demure and polite but also very interested in this obsolete skill
Quinneapolis
who got into swords for really asinine reasons but then got really into it
Quinneapolis
incapable of telling when anyone is into her
Doge-lover Joja
I'm just gonna sit here and hope it inexplicably gets animated
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my girl's very soft-spoken and gentle but even when she isn't she's very calm and polite. she is perhaps maybe too calm
Quinneapolis
fembo gets up at dawn every day to do stretches and greet the morning sun
Gabiluzbad
I think the main plot is more focused on the girls than the teacher
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At least at first
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He’s just like “not my problem I’m retired from stabbing.”
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After a few early scenes where he establishes his chops to the audience
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Deals with punks with cheap autoswords that make them think they’re hot shit
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In some ways, he’s like an old man who’s all washed up
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But in other ways he’s like “I’m 35 I’m not old
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Gaggle of 16 year old girls: “sure you aren’t, old man.”
Quinneapolis
is there an upper limit or expected average on age? I was thinking mid or maybe low twenties
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It’s not with a high school or anything so students can be any age
Quinneapolis
I'll say 23 then for now, adjusting only if everyone else ends up WAY younger
Quinneapolis
out during the day chopping wood for unclear reasons, has no idea why she's gathered a crowd of spectators
Quinneapolis
is this Earth?
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I do not think this is earth
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Maybe this is a colony of earth and the war was against earth for independence
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Regardless this isn’t a space opera the action is all limited to this planet
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I love the idea of having sword fights on an alien world though
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It’s ridiculous
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This planet is kinda arid and dry
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They’re still terraforming it
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Meanwhile earth has been transformed into a giant garden utopia
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And is home mainly to Uber rich aristocratic assholes
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Teacher came back from the war and he was like “I learned this style from my father, but after seeing war up close I’ve made some changes to it taking that into account.”
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“To make it more deadly and brutal?”
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“......no”
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Because war is hell and now he’s trying not to hurt people more than necessary
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So his specialty is disarming autosword users
Quinneapolis
if you get the sword out of their hand they're fucked
Gabiluzbad
Yup
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
how hard is the scifi here. or rather, are autoswords forged by master swordsmiths or are they like, made in factories with computers programming them.
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You can get mass produced Autoswords and they're alright
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Or you can get super fancy ones and they're better
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I think it's more like
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You can convert a regular sword into an autosword
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You just need to replace the hilt
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
okay
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Teacher who needs a name doesn't allow autoswords in his school
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
so theoretically, a legendary blacksmith who makes the greatest swords would still be, like, a possible thing.
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sure!
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though they might have a webpage
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
so im thinking
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
the legendary ultimate blacksmith, who created the greatest swords ever forged. whose innate understanding of smithing was such that she was thought to be an incarnation of the god of the forge. the finest swords that will never dull, never chip, will cut through other swords.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
shes gone now.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
her daughter, though.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
her daughter has found that her mother's finest works have been converted to autoswords. which she sees as basically a blasphemy against the smithing process. and possibly, villainous faction has kidnapped the blacksmith and is forcing her to produce autoswords.
Gabiluzbad
I think we have two main villain factions
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
so she is on a quest now. to take back all of the swords that her mother made and restore them to their proper shape.
Gabiluzbad
1 that is a bunch of corporate goons/arms dealers
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
and also rescue her mother. she's not like super concerned on that front though because she's pretty sure her mom could just make a supersword and get out if she really needed to.
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and 2 that is a bunch of warrior purists who HATE autoswords but also are super hardcore "laws of nature survival of the fittest the weak don't deserve to survive" assholes
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Who want to recruit teacher because he's a goddamn legend
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the arms dealers would probably be the ones who would kidnap a master blacksmith to make high grade autoswords
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
makes sense
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
sword daughter is definitely young but like. she is there to learn how to beat autoswords so that she can reclaim her mom's swords. because she has to beat them to take the swords back.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
by the end of the story shes carrying around like twenty swords at all times
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oh my god I love sword daughter already
Echo
Tentatively considering: scrappy nineteen-year-old street urchin type who signed up for the school because she was planning on robbing this shitty old pervert and making off with everything her gay little hands could carry the second she could wheedle the codes to the safe or wherever he kept his/the school's money out of him.
Echo
And then he gets beaten up and the guy who takes over the school turns out to actually be, like. A nice person. Who she'd feel bad about stealing from.
Echo
And also her classmates are nice people and she kind of has actual friends now??? So that's weird.
Echo
Probably wields a one-handed sword and a knife in her off-hand, because she just seems like the kind of person who has a lot of knives.
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Establishing some rules about Autoswords
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- The don't make you any faster or stronger than normal, but you can turn them "up" or "down" in which case they will use more of your muscle strength
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So if you go full power you'll wreck house but you'll also like
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be in agony as the autosword forces you to tear and dislocate your own muscles trying to make you move faster
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- The autosword can function on it's own to a limited capability, but having equipable sensors on your person can give it a better idea of what's going on around you
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Which lets it react more efficiently
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It's common for soldier's to have like extra cameras for their autoswords on their back and shoulder and belt and such
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literal eyes in the back of your head
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People who are concerned about appearances or who don't want to have their autosensors be obvious often disguise them as like
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jewelry and shit
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If you can destroy an autosensor it'll make the autosword less effective of a fighter
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- Autosword manufacturers are always on the lookout for talented swordsmen they can use to teach their autosword AIs new moves
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Many sword masters are reluctant to do this because like
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Once they scan you doing all your moves
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ANYONE who buys an autosword from them will have access to all your moves
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Autosword "AI" is an exaggeration. They aren't intelligent
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- There are Armored Autoswords
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which include an armored exoskeleton, usually for just your sword arm
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They have the advantage of being much stronger and able to just power through a normal person's defenses
big woop
Does the tech have alternate applications (industrial, assistive devices, etc) or does the autosword industry have a monopoly on "devices what make you move good"?
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Hmm
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If one company had a monopoly on autoweapons that’d make for some interesting story beats
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Like “were they supplying both sides of the war?” Or “do they have override codes that can hijack an autosword remotely”
Quinneapolis
fuck that's a good lategame plotline
Quinneapolis
an autosword can control your entire body
Quinneapolis
surely nobody will use that for evil
Gabiluzbad
/MGS 4 theme playing in the distance
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Shit like autospears and autoaxes are definitely on the table
Quinneapolis
on one hand, expanding auto to other weapons makes sense
Quinneapolis
on the other hand, autoguns seem like they'd break the system a bit
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Naw they don’t work with ranged weapons
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Because perspective and reasons
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You see, destiny, mysterious ways, etc etc
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SO autotech only works effectively in a very short range
big woop
Me being myself, I'm kind of tempted to have a girl who's like "fuck autoswords all my homies hate autoswords, also can I please take one apart and build something else with it"
Quinneapolis
I like the idea of autosword tech repurposed as disability assistance
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
thats a very strong concept
Gabiluzbad
Yeah it’s AMAZINGLY versatile technology
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That’s being strangled to nothing but weapons by corporate greed
big woop
Fundamentally opposed to their use in warfare but also fascinated by the underlying technology so clearly the best course of action is to learn how to disarm autosword users so she can cannibalize their weapons for other projects
Quinneapolis
following a bunch of nerve damage just wear an autoglove and you can use your hand again
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
I think sword daughter is very young compared to the rest of the cast? she's like 14.
Quinneapolis
fembo adopt
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If you saw promotional art for this series
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It’d be one cool sword man and a gaggle of much younger looking girls
Quinneapolis
he's their dad
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
she also is crazy good at swords. like. able to be really good as a smith to fix autoswords and put them back to normal, but also just an obscenely talented genius at swordplay.
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And it would set off all my danger alarms
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
the catch being
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But yes he doesn’t date any of them he guides and nurtures them
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And they date each other
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
she treats the swords as if they were alive. she talks to them like they're living beings. and is confused that other people don't anthropomorphize their swords.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
and also she has zero skills that aren't sword-related.
big woop
It probably takes a while before she actually gets her hands on an autoweapon to tinker with, but she's got plans.
Gabiluzbad
I feel like 14 is a bit young for being a master sword smith and duelist
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But she at the very least shows a lot of potential
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
sword daughter definitely believes that weapons have souls and wills of their own and even that autoswords have their own place

but taking a normal sword and retrofitting it to be an autosword is blasphemous.
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
Gabiluzbad : yeah shes not like a master at either yet. shes way better than anyone her age has any right to be, but
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
she has smith skills on account of watching her mom and sword skills on natural talent, but is still at the school to learn how to be better
big woop
...fuck, A Little Too Into Autotech Girl is just another reskin of that OC I keep making, but with swords this time
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
embrace it
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
embrace the resurrecting ocs thing
big woop
I know what I'm about I guess
big woop
Scrappy gearmonkies who can't keep their hands off proprietary tech
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
... so considering sword daughter's smith skills are basically entirely for the purpose of like, taking the autosword hilts off her mom's swords and replacing them with proper hilts
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
this means sword daughter eventually will have a bunch of autosword hilts with no purpose lying around for gearmonkey to play with
big woop
excellent
Lightning Bolt
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ : man now I'm imagining sword daughter talking to a sword as she refits it from autosword to normal sword
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stroking its flat and telling it everything's going to be okay
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
LITERALLY WHAT SHE DOES
ғᴏxʏᴍᴏʀᴏɴ
the swords that were retrofitted are suffering and she's trying to help :-(
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