
Awe
[TrV] revises alternate character concept again

Awe
this time because I rightly realized that a pile of hooks and plot twists does not itself consitute a character and the previous version had no motivation

Princess Emily
character hooks are good though

Awe
this is true, and maybe there's room for another, on account of there being only three with the black box (which I just really like the idea of, so I wanted to apply it to the alternate concept too)