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[that new punchwizards OCverse] I failed to not make a new setting so it's time for worldbuilding
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Okudo
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The Hundred Million Paths
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is an ancient, infinitely variable martial art
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the most powerful in the world
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it is learned in three stages
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the first is concerned with the physical techniques of fighting with your body
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the second is concerned with the usage of Chakras within the body
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the third is concerned with using elemental Chi in conjunction with those Chakras
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true masters of Okudo can cleave heaven and earth with a single blow
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In the past, there was a golden age of the world, where the Paths led to miracles beyond imagination, and civilization flourished
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Okudo was used for sports-like tournaments and matches, but also to enhance all parts of life
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nearly everyone could command Chi easily
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this continued up until the great okudo war
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which left the world in ruins, a massive swath of it now completely uninhabitable
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Okudo's true potential was too much for humanity to bear, and it overflowed
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The destroyed part of the world has shifted over centuries, molded by out of control Chi and the grudges of the dead
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and become the Necropolis, a massive sprawling city of the dead surrounded by a chaotic wasteland of destruction
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Wraiths live there, half-living forces of destruction fueled by the techniques and emotions of those consumed by the flames of war
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All countries that border the Necropolis have temples along the border, where warriors train in the altered, modern version of Okudo in order to fight the wraiths that try to leave and bring destruction to the world
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It is in one such temple that our story unfolds
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The temples are huge, practically standalone cities
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where warriors train in ancient martial arts to protect the world, claim personal glory, or achieve their own ends
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Let's talk about the actual theories of Okudo, and how they have changed since the great war
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CHAKRA
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Metaphysical constructs within the body that control the flow and application of Chi
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There are six five in total
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One of the first tasks for the second stage of Okudo is learning how to open and close chakras
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they are:
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Heart Chakra
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Used to draw Chi out from within yourself.
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Without its use, a person's Chi will remain inert and cannot be used.
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When infused, it can alter your body's internal structure - enhancing of muscles, altering of blood flow, reinforcing organs
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Mind Chakra
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Used to direct the flow of Chi within the body. Usually remains closed and only used indirectly to manipulate the other Chakra.
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When infused, it can alter your thoughts and mental abilities. Extremely volatile.
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Breath Chakra
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Used to draw Chi into, or expel Chi out of, the body.
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Opens an alternative source of Chi once your own personal reserves are depleted. When infused, it is the basis of a number of ranged techniques as well.
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Skin Chakra
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Used to affirm the border between yourself and the world. Keep external Chi out and internal Chi in.
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When infused, primarily a source of defensive abilities.
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Blade Chakra
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Used to concentrate Chi into a destructive force. Expel Chi from the body in explosive strikes.
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When infused, you can turn pysical blows into metaphysical weapons.
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Unknown Chakra
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The sixth Chakra is no longer taught, in order to prevent a repeat of past tragedies.
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CHI
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The vital energy of all life, and the universe itself.
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Once you have mastered the opening and activation of Chakras, you must learn how to infuse them with Chi in order to perform true Okudo techniques.
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There are seven six types;
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Flame Chi
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Properties: Heat, destruction, life.
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Water Chi
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Properties: Flow, change, movement.
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Earth Chi
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Properties: Inertia, resilience, weight.
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Metal Chi
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Properties: Hardness, sharpness, conduction.
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Sky Chi
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Properties: Freedom, nature, time.
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Void Chi
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Properties: Emptiness, consumption, infinity.
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Unknown Chi
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The seventh Chi is no longer taught in modern Okudo.
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TECHNIQUES
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The fundamental basis of Okudo techniques is infusing different kinds of Chi into different Chakra.
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Of course, it's nothing so simple as Fire + Breath = Fireball Technique
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Chakras must be carefully manipulated, opening and closing in precise orders, with multiple different types of Chi being infused into each in different proportions.
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Sometimes multiple types of Chi are balanced by the same Chakra. Timing, density, and concentration are all vital.
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Then, the technique must be given form via willpower and instinct.
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Incantations, hand signs, and the like are used, but not universally - they are all ways to guide your concentration and focus your will in order to more precisely control your Chakra and direct the flow of Chi.
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hey this rules
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our characters so far:
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- Tsuchito(sp?), a young genius talent who masters countless techniques effortlessly. On the fast track to become the temple's strongest fighter.
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- Kameko, a no-talent loser who spends endless hours practicing every one of the few techniques she can get the hang of. Works five times as hard as Tsuchito for a fifth of the results.
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However, every technique she knows, she knows every contour of, ingrained into her mind and body through thousands of repetitions. Unexpectedly, Tsuchito's equal.
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- The Teacher, who took responsibility for a victory that wasn't hers, and is now living a lie because if she ever comes clean she loses everything.
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- C-kun, a friend of both Tsuchito and Kameko. The Shikamaru.
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- Inventor-chan, a young martial arts mad scientist in the business not of mastering ancient techniques but in invending new ones.
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inventing*
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That's it so far. Tsuchito and Kameko's rivalry is the main story thread
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the hare and the tortoise respectively
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Matashichiro
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is C-kun
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check
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roundabout reference to a play about a bakeneko and revenge
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I haven't QUITE figured out how that fits together
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I'm already thinking of a character concept
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everyone is animal-themed
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possibly younger than the main rivalry duo, the Kouhai
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Kameko = tortoise, Tsuchito = hare, Matashichiro = cat, Teacher-sensei = fox
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The main hook I'm thinking of is like...
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Thinking of the anecdote in modern martial arts of "the brown belt is more dangerous to spar with than the black belt"
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because the brown belt will do wild unconventional bullshit
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The character has been trained in Okudo but does literally NOTHING in the proper taught methods. Every technique they use is some roundabout unconventional setup they essentially taught themself.
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YES THAT EXACTLY
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All of their Okudo techniques are like. Infusing their Chakras with weird Chi combinations, or using Chi in methods most people wouldn't even think to try
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Are they good? No. But they're effective entirely because they're things no one else would try.
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They're almost certainly on the surface weaker than Tsuchito, Kaneko, and Matashichiro
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often wins but never wins cleanly
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But they have a habit of punching above their weight because they will just throw out SOMETHING, even if it's a weird and not very good technique
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yeah
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Dog is the obvious open choice given all the other animal themes but I'm actually leaning like
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a crow
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extremely clever but in all the wrong ways
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I made Inventor-kun's animal theme a snake, and I'm likely going with Isami for their name.
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Isami is fucking thrilled to just keep tinkering with new Okudo techniques- they don't care about winning fights, they just want to make stuff, it's all so cool.
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...if we're doing Naruto comparisons still, I think I somehow made "what if Orochimaru was just a wacky side character from the start instead of ever being a villain".
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"Who somehow shows up as a wacky side character in the sequel series, what the fuck".
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Also, Isami is definitely genderfluid- one of the many, many techniques they invented lets them switch between male and female forms, which they do like other people change clothing.
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Echo you just made ninja Wayland
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I love it
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my thought on Rookie-kun's personality is like
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"what if Dan Hibiki was a shitty teenager"
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none of his shit works how anyone thinks it's supposed to, he's seemingly cocky but emotionally turns on a dime
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"I AM A GENIUS!"
"OH NO"
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"Why didn't you have a defense against that?"
"It never even OCCURRED to me that someone would use a fire skin technique to set themselves on fire"
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exactly
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Shit, I did make ninja Wayland.
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Not identically but like
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They should hang out
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No. No, Sven, you don't understand- that was a technique Isami invented. We were talking about it in the previous plurk.
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oh shit it was
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Isami is probably just like
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following Rookie-kun around with a clipboard
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for inspiration
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"What is he going to do next?"
"SKY+HEART FLYING BY BLOWING REALLY HARD TECHNIQUE"
"Fascinating"
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Alternately, Rookie-kun keeps trying to look at Isami's research notes to see cool new stuff and refuses to believe that "brand new technique" doesn't necessarily mean "super cool or useful technique".
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most of rookie-kun's shit is absolute nonsense that could not work in practical circumstances like 95% of the time
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Yeah, same with Isami.
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but by god, that 5%
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...we keep making the exact same- you know what, I'm just going to link the previous plurk.
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i did see the previous plurk in part but I also saw it had like 500 replies
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EXTREMELY VALID.
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That moment of "well I'm curious but also that's 500 fucking replies".
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You just look at it and it's like "nerds happened here".
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yeah
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/touches ground
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"Something nerdy happened here...."
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tl;dr The idea of these two being disaster nerds together is strong, because they both throw tons of shit at the wall to see what (if anything) sticks. : D
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Sometimes what sticks to the wall is you
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I'm feeling pretty good about Hideyoshi as a name
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That's Progress
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using the kanji combination of "excellent" and "good luck"
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The key difference is that Isami is doing it on purpose because fuck yes, magic martial arts science, whereas Hideyoshi seems to be doing it because he genuinely thinks he's doing it right.
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I think Matashiciro specializes in Earth and Water Chi
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To Change Weight
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And like
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Walk on walls and shit
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Isami greeting Hideyoshi like "Goooood morning~! How's my favorite lab rat- I mean beta test- I mean student."
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Hideyoshi is ABSOLUTELY doing it because he thinks he's either stumbled on secret techniques no one has even THOUGHT about doing or because he is literally throwing out the first combination of Chakra + Chi to come to mind
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Exactly.
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Whereas Isami is just like "okay, trial 71 is a go! Let's see what happens this time, I can't wait".
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(sets self on fire again)
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"Notes: fire occurred after a five second delay. Progress."
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Hideyoshi is also the kouhai who aggressively nicknames everyone
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Pfft, amazing.
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Mata gets it the worst because he's probably something ridiculous like 'Shichi-kun'
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I already played a socially oblivious genius who loved their field in Synblade, so I think that Isami is a socially skilled genius who loves their field.
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They're weirdly charming and get along very well with people, they know how to work a room.
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actually, hm, thinking on a different name
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yeah, changed it, actually
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Ryota
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I kind of wanted to give him a more traditional-ish Shonen Protag style name to conflate with the others
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and also to contrast the fact that he is Constantly Doing Literally Everything Wrong
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Well, he gave Isami a ton of useful new data. That's sort of like doing something right?
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Hmm.
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Also he's called Ryota but I also assume he's just
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often called 'Kuro-kun' or some other variant
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due to having spiky black hair
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to further like... nail in the whole "crow" angle
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At first Matashichiro calls him a pimple
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because he's a black head and annoying
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perfect
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some more worldbuilding
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Forbidden Techniques
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These fall almost universally into one domain
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and that's techniques that use the Sixth Chakra and/or the Seventh Chi
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They are extremely powerful and EXTREMELY dangerous
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not just to your enemies but to your friends, yourself, and the fabric of reality
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it is EXTREMELY difficult to find any writings on them or any teachers willing to teach them, because the world has stamped most of them out after the okudo war
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because the planet probably can't take a second one
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Wraiths
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You cannot, generally speaking, communicate with a wraith
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They aren't people, they're people-shaped imprints of the emotions of fallen warriors
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specifically the emotions they felt in battle
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they carry out those final instincts like programming, fighting a war that ended centuries ago against anyone who's still alive to fight
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they are corporeal, and they know ancient kung fu
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most wraiths look human or mostly human, with the exception of still bearing shadows of whatever killed them
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often walking around with swords sticking out of them, or limbs or heads missing
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I imagine fire chi, being Life Themed, is super useful against them
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that does make sense
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stronger wraiths are either the ghosts of more powerful warriors or amalgamations of multiple warriors into one entity
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they look less like people as they become more powerful, ranging from guys with extra limbs or monstrous appendages to towering violence behemoths
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the strongest wraiths are imprints of the final moments of true ancient masters of okudo
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In my head they look kinda like the Nazghul
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they look the most human, and even carry some twisted shadows of their original minds
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they are some of the most dangerous beings on the planet
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(Specifically the white ghosts not the hooded figures)
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lesser wraiths do generally have a pale, undead look about them
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but sometimes you're in the necropolis and you just come across an old man with a sword
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and what you do then
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is you all run in different directions as fast as you can
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and hope he doesn't follow you
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Okudo does include weapon techniques, but they're not especially common
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Wraiths are highly resilient to ordinary attacks, with Okudo as the closest thing they have to a weakness
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They're still tough as hell
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Kameko
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Age: 16
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Parents: Nobody of note
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Teacher: Nobody special
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Talent: None
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Specialty: None
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Physical stats: A bit south of average
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Mental stats: The same
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Tenacity: Extreme
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Kameko is the overlooked kid of class, doesn't stand out in anything
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But she wants to stand out
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And she wants to be strong
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so she tries
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she tries, all the time
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oh my god, does she try
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no knack for manipulating Chi or controlling Chakra
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she just brute forces it, one move at a time
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the same way she learned how to just, like, do a kick
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practice it until your legs won't move anymore
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then the next day, go out there and keep kicking
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Despite being functionally in different worlds, Kameko kind of idolizes Tsuchito
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and considers her her rival
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which is... very one-sided, in arc 1
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using ordinary methods to learn ordinary techniques, compensating for a lack of natural talent by never taking breaks and getting every inch she can out of every technique she can learn
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she is aware that she's a punchline who probably won't amount to anything
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and low-key thinks that all her efforts won't really amount to much
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and that nobody actually likes her very much
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and that any day she's gonna get kicked out of the temple for being too weak
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and you know, general depression mood
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she works so hard partially just to shut up the brain goblins
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Oh no... :-(
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and puts on a hot-blooded cheerful idiot face to fake it until she makes it
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with mixed results
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she's as surprised as anyone when she beats Tsuchito TSUKITO I was spelling it wrong oops
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sorry hannah
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anyway Kameko definitely has kind of a crush on Tsukito, amidst all the desire to catch up with a remote rival
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Teacher is Akako btw
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got it
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sall good
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tsukito literally written as "moon rabbit" ftr
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