I.......think I might have finished the first draft of this app... except that I need to come up with a closing paragraph for the personality.

And then I need someone to tell me how bad it is so I can fix it

grabby hands

rarity: Discretion Advised: 18+ Content

8D I will take my time going through it.

/sqeeeee

/hides

And but hide I mean Thank you from the bottom of my heart while also being slightly terrified because I'm lame like that ^^;;;;;;;

*by , geez I should sleep >_>

Oh crap rarity! Just to warn you, there's some pretty dark things that happen to Whisper. one of which is a miscarriage. I'm... not sure if I should warn for that or not?

I'll be good. :3

I only read the history since you said you were still working on the personality, but overall I liked it. I thought it flowed really well and I understood what was going on even if I didn't know the exact

source material. If I had to nitpick, I'd say I'd like to see more about Whisper and the fighting ring. It seemed to be a little out of nowhere that she liked it. I'd like to hear more as to why?