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〔LITTLE NUMBERS & EVERYDAY〕
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坦白說，這兩篇FANFIC，現在比較引人入勝的反而是EVERYDAY了。
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原因很簡單，明眼人都看得出來，LITTLE NUMBERS每篇的字數雖然增加了，但其實是在原地踏步，HEARWOLF花了很長的篇幅在描寫兩位主角的心態轉變過程，而且還很厲害的，許多時候讀者還是得自行READ BETWEEN THE LINES。
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再加上我不時到HEARWOLF的湯去看她回答讀者提問，很清楚地讓人感覺到她還沒想清楚要怎麼走到那個已確定好的HAPPY ENDING，大家要有心理準備，這一篇還有很長的等待之路要走，但我仍覺得LITTLE NUMBERS是非常引人深思的作品。
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LITTLE NUMBERS CH16的名句摘錄：
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Do you ever think that not knowing what you want is harder than wanting something you can’t have?
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EVERYDAY則明顯不同，作者幾天前在第13章後發表了一篇簡短聲明，強調將會固定三天更新一章（昨晚沒更新是因為網路壞了），而且有很多情節都已經想好要怎麼往下寫。
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很明顯的，這是個有經驗的寫手——搞不好還是有名的FANFIC作者，因為她允諾會在全篇結束後，公開自己是誰。（我想是不想要有被催稿的壓力吧！）
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EVERYDAY的故事結構完整，對兩個角色歷經幾乎死別的心理描繪入微，我喜歡Blaine對Kurt的憐愛，我喜歡Kurt重新發現愛情的美妙的過程，我喜歡Blaine沒事測試自己過人的精神忍耐力：你老公暗示你吻他的時候，請不要裝傻傷害自己身體好嗎？ 
🌴濟州島的甜蘋果💍
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: 我想問一下“Kurt, you’re...you’re perfect. That was - everything. Was it...did you...?這裡的did you…?是在問什麼??
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我的想法是這樣：
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“I’ve never kissed anyone before, did I do it right?” It’s more of an exhale than words, and Blaine only hears the question
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because he’s been listening to Kurt for 10 years, is pretty sure that by this point
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he has a sixth sense based on unconsciously tracking his every movement and breath.
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“Did you do it right?” Blaine huffs before he schools his voice into a more soothing tone. (Blaine單純是重覆Kurt的問題而已)
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“Kurt, you’re...you’re perfect. That was perfect, everything was perfect.”
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“Was it your first kiss? did you...?” (Blaine當然是知道的，但我猜想他只是藉由確認來安撫Kurt的不安。)
🌴濟州島的甜蘋果💍
謝謝~~!!!