<- handwritten text color preview they didnt like at all 
slightly colored ver
TENNA.
i liked my sketch ver / even slightly edited ver more because now ir seems like theres barely any effort put in it 
<- handwritten text color preview they didnt like at all 
slightly colored ver
<- handwritten text color preview they didnt like at all slightly colored ver
taco
i like the 1st one
TENNA.
i Liked it too abut i Think they thought it was ass FUCKKKKKK
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this is For a Roblox game Also
taco
they are stupid
taco
the 1st one is so much easier on the eyes and its way more creative
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is it possible to rework the first one like taco i believe its more visually pleasing however some of the letters being outside of the icon i can immediately pinpoint so make sure thats like perfectly aligned after final version
taco
i lowkey ljke that its outside the icon its peak when people do that
TENNA.
I honestly was going for the outside the icon look GUH
TENNA.
i can rework that though
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in their sketch version they had it like that too so i was like hnrnrnrnr
taco
these guys are so BORING!!!!
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IT COULD JUST BE ME BUT IT FEELS OUT OF PLACE TO ME cause its like. only1 letter peeking oit and not both the start letter and ending letter ohhh
taco
i think that could just be fixed by moving sorrows a little to the right
taco
or making it slightly bigger
taco
or longer
TENNA.
aye aye
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i think maybe Their design is also ok because maybe it needs to be simple to be read well in the game list but also
TENNA.
i feel like that doesnt fit the retro roblox kinda style they were going for?
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this is what i mean whoops 
myth is like. perfect there its nice to look at but the Sorrows does not align for me
myth is like. perfect there its nice to look at but the Sorrows does not align for me
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oh Yeah i get that i was in Hell trying to make rhe sorrows look nice H
taco
the w and the s look slightly squashed too
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🫡
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again rhis was just a color preview so
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was nawt really trying H
taco
but i truly think they are missing out not using the first one idk the second one seems so much more dead and flat to me
taco
it looks like a newgrounds logo
TENNA.
maybe thats the vibe theyre Going for ....i will be silent until more things are said
TENNA.
whatever im gettinf paid anyway 🥶🥶🥶🥶
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yeah exactly provide input but if they dont want peak then oh well youre just doing your job some people are like that unfortunately
TENNA.
Truth...