crewgioh, as I head to bed... thoughts on Warik's app?

I shall respond when I reawaken

i like it! the only thing i might find a place to stress more is the level to which he is fuckin unhinged
you mention the sadomasochism but not that he's a hammy freak about it

bugge. /wakes up early again, hms
that would probably fit best in the second question, what makes him happy.
so far I've added "(And if he killed everyone, there'd be no one to appreciate his theatrics.)"
there should prolly be more....

you could talk about how much fun he has absolutely wrecking mai?

hmm... yeah, that's a good point. I did mention in the 5th question that he enjoys the process of killing people, but that doesn't quite get things across...

I got so hung up on the point that he doesn't just kill everyone he sees, that there is a method in there, that I forgot to emphasize that when he does let loose he really lets loose.

5th question is nearly 300 words already... >_>a
ponders

he's choosy about how he kills to maximize Fun

hm! I tried to work that in already, but it must have been worded badly, so I'll have to find a way to rephrase that part, thanks :0a

overhauled a sentence in the 5th question: "The horror: he'd be a slasher villain, one born of vengeance but who prioritizes entertaining himself with his kills."

that works much better than how it was before, it got all jumbled in my head before

sounds good! he has such a nice time torturing people, go off buddy

the I LOVE TRASH meme but it's I LOVE PAIN
so excited to see the enforcers try to get him to produce light

he's already talking to one - Dee, who is just. so clearly uncomfortable that he likes the flower crowns.

it takes a special kind of weirdo to discomfit an IASIP character too....

you all already so READY meanwhile I still have to start atem's one. It sounds great!