Remus frowned. He didn’t want to start another argument, but he’d always admired Sirius’s open attitude towards physical affection. “Maybe we should all feel entitled to a little comfort when we’re poorly,” he said carefully.
“We… Black shouldn’t demand what he doesn’t deserve,” Severus replied. He opened his mouth again but shut it without adding anything else.
Staring down at Severus, Remus wondered if his headache was getting worse. Tension had returned to his jaw, and he’d sounded odd. Sad and… envious, Remus realized with surprise.
Remus felt oddly proud, like he’d coaxed a wild animal to come eat from his hand. Emboldened, he slid his fingers into Severus’s hair to rub at his scalp.
石內卜發出舒服的呻吟，路平僵住，發現是無意識呻吟後就裝沒聽見 At the light touch, Severus’s lips parted slightly with a soft moan. Remus froze momentarily, but, judging by the sudden tension in Severus’s shoulders and the faint flush in his cheeks, the noise had been involuntary, so Remus forced himself to pretend he hadn’t noticed and continued carding his fingers through Severus’s hair.
Although several weeks had passed since the last Order meeting he’d attended, he remembered everything that had happened as if it had happened yesterday.
Or, more precisely, he remembered everything that had happened after the meeting. The phantom feeling of Lupin’s fingers in his hair had haunted him, distracting him while he was teaching, plaguing him during conversations with the other professors, and, worst of all, tormenting him in the middle of the night.
Severus stopped dead, glaring at the ground as if it were personally to blame for his predicament. Lupin was sure to tell Black, and Black wouldn’t hesitate to mock him. Even if Lupin chose to let him down gently, Black would pick at him until he snapped, and being drawn into a duel in the middle of the meeting was sure to annoy Albus
Tonight though, there was only one chair left. It stood mockingly, temptingly, open on Lupin’s right. When he glanced at Lupin in surprise, unable to stop himself, there was a hint of a smile in Lupin’s eyes. On Lupin’s left, Black glowered at him.
Severus didn’t deign to reply. He sat stiffly in the chair and turned his attention to Albus. Meetings never lasted that long, and he had done many worse things in his life than wait through an uncomfortable situation. He just had to be prepared for whatever Lupin had planned next.
石內卜 Having his wand out would only earn him suspicious and disapproving glares, but Severus made sure his fingers lingered near the hidden pocket that concealed his wand in the sleeve of his robes. He’d let Lupin make the first move.
路平 Despite his vigilance, he could see no sign of an impending attack. Lupin appeared to be perfectly at ease and paying full attention to the meeting, without a single glance to spare for Severus. His hands were in clear view, resting on the table, and he was smiling faintly.
我沒想過會看到這麼合胃口的文
而且還是2024/06/28的文
還沒完結，不知道會寫到哪.......................（餓
【非劇透心得】
第一篇：
路平釋出善意，讓石內卜放下一點點戒心
A Little Comfort - 2littletime707 - Harry Potter - J...
第二篇：
石內卜內心拉鋸戰（。）然後被弄到跑去浴室自瀆
A Little Risk - 2littletime707 - Harry Potter - J. K... （下收劇透心得）
現在才兩章
兩人還沒確認關係
還沒做（乾
覺得路石文，有太多是..........比較負面的敘述（
自我傷害的文不少
但我目前比較想看好好處理關係的文
路平一直釋出善意想改善他與石內卜的關係，但石內卜不領情。不過不領情的主要原因，是因為憎惡天狼星的各種嘲弄。
石內卜雖然知道路平是偏向善意，但路平為天狼星的好友，他無法排除路平會跟天狼星講那些「把柄」
石內卜在嚴重偏頭痛這樣脆弱的情況下，模糊間透露出一絲悲傷與嫉妒
“A little,” Severus admitted grudgingly. He frowned, “Don’t tell Black about this.”
“That…” Severus pressed his lips together, clearly changing his mind about what he was going to say. “Of course Black would feel so entitled.”
Staring down at Severus, Remus wondered if his headache was getting worse. Tension had returned to his jaw, and he’d sounded odd. Sad and… envious, Remus realized with surprise.
不過石內卜還是妥協膝枕（畢竟偏頭痛到直接吐ㄌ）
Remus felt oddly proud, like he’d coaxed a wild animal to come eat from his hand. Emboldened, he slid his fingers into Severus’s hair to rub at his scalp.
笑爛，路平很有成就感wwwwww彷彿成功把野生生物好哄來被餵食
At the light touch, Severus’s lips parted slightly with a soft moan. Remus froze momentarily, but, judging by the sudden tension in Severus’s shoulders and the faint flush in his cheeks, the noise had been involuntary, so Remus forced himself to pretend he hadn’t noticed and continued carding his fingers through Severus’s hair.
是心動齁
齁
不過因為當初下樓時人就已經很疲憊了，所以意識到石內卜睡著後，自己也跟著想休息了QQ
因為頭痛好點了，所以石內卜坐起來，然後以讓路平靠肩休息作為回禮
路平想起石內卜不想被天狼星看到自己狼狽狀態，所以幫忙隱瞞石內卜的存在
偷偷不鎖門，讓石內卜能悄悄離開
這可以說是我目前最喜歡的一個篇文wwwwww
因為路平真的好wwww機車wwwwww根本小惡魔
害可憐的石內卜在整場會議坐立難安
然後就惱羞：這都是路平的錯（。
都能感受到石內卜當下快兩眼一黑
Tonight though, there was only one chair left. It stood mockingly, temptingly, open on Lupin’s right. When he glanced at Lupin in surprise, unable to stop himself, there was a hint of a smile in Lupin’s eyes. On Lupin’s left, Black glowered at him.
其實羅琳的用字也給我這種感受
光是把剩下的椅子用stood mockingly
Severus didn’t deign to reply. He sat stiffly in the chair and turned his attention to Albus. Meetings never lasted that long, and he had done many worse things in his life than wait through an uncomfortable situation. He just had to be prepared for whatever Lupin had planned next.
接下來一整大段內心戲
Having his wand out would only earn him suspicious and disapproving glares, but Severus made sure his fingers lingered near the hidden pocket that concealed his wand in the sleeve of his robes. He’d let Lupin make the first move.
Despite his vigilance, he could see no sign of an impending attack. Lupin appeared to be perfectly at ease and paying full attention to the meeting, without a single glance to spare for Severus. His hands were in clear view, resting on the table, and he was smiling faintly.
感謝好文推薦～
昨天點進去馬上秒速看完兩篇
好久沒有看到描寫關係這麽好的
而且還是路石～超喜歡
描述Severus理性層面的思考邏輯，還有Remus 最擅長
邊裝可憐無辜的誘導式詢問都很到位。真心很覺得這描寫實在厲害（心理層面很不好寫確實是）對不對QQQQQ這種描述文筆讚讚
沒錯！Severus的理性思考
但有時候快達到鑽牛角尖了（ㄍ，以及Remus的誘導式詢問外加裝無辜（ㄍ描寫的很會捏對對對心理層面的揣摩真的不容易
我自己是不太看長篇文，而且這還是鰥夫單親爸爸路平（）但當初看一則留言講說「看完之後能理解前面的鋪層」我就跳下去ㄌ
劇情基本上圍繞在暫住石內卜家的路平育兒崩潰（乾）然後雙方慢慢面對心結，而且是時間線拉長的解開心結，側面描繪了被劫盜團當年針對他時，造成的影響有多大
乾沒放網址
結果只有接吻
雖然接吻戲有辣啦..............但...................但這完全沒有什麼adult content 啊？？？？
成人內容是什麼？？？？育兒嗎？？？？
因為我本來就是因為路石這個CP入同人坑的，而我自己在JO坑的時候，也是因為喜愛的路石文作者的鼓勵，我才有勇氣跑場次出本。所以路石這個CP對我來說意義很重要，我也很喜歡描寫關係性細膩的作者，感謝推薦～
我就不透露太多了祝看文順利呀欸嘿嘿
我看完了！！！（有使用翻譯輔助所以才會比較快）
真的太喜歡作者的描述方式，還有兩人關係性的氛圍了！很久沒有出現看完之後，腦中還會忍不住一直回想情節的文章了（不管是中文/英文/還是日文），所以我也覺得好感動～
我一開始覺得光前面的情節描述互動氛圍就已經很香了，所以到接吻我覺得已經很不錯。
⋯⋯不過我後來一路看到結尾真的覺得沒有直接做下去有點可惜
整個真想給你們錢快點做，也不會到不完整，但是都已經這樣這樣那樣那樣了（是怎樣？）接下去上個床以「成人的觀點」來說我覺得⋯⋯非常可以。（但結果最成人的部份是養小孩還有找工作）
（怎麼可以
我自己最喜歡的部份其中有一個是喝酒追悼的方式，那部分一整段的情節描述還有角色的互動氛圍都非常的合理，很喜歡他們這樣互動的方式，對應情感不迴避而又非常成熟，大加分～
後面確定感情的部份也寫得很好！真的就是非常的自然、非常的真實，而且會不自覺為他們感到開心呢！不僅是跨出去面對感情還有情慾的限制，還有著對於克服個人創傷所付出的決心和限制等等，很讚😎
不過我回鍋重看，然後又用路平的角度揣摩
不過以角色邏輯來講，會有各種誤會很正常，畢竟前面還有陳年往事的積怨啊...............（躺）
是說我覺得以創作來講，能把這些「誤會」不寫得過於刻意也不簡單（掌聲鼓勵
因為真的說到底，雙方也都有錯..........（糾成毛線球
但路平退了一步，並祈求原諒，石內卜也
勉強退了一步，接受路平的道歉但對天狼星還是有怨恨（躺平（畢竟以角色經歷來講這並非一朝一夕能直接原諒但還是難過沒床戲
最成人的內容就是育兒，還有對，找工作做