Dagashi-ya
doodle:
Rei Togetsu! zombie HapiAra ver.!
https://i.imgur.com/vFiNOnm.png
i'd have to admit: their zombie versions are kinda like my muses now. so fun to draw haha! xD
xyph
Might as well complete the group? (haha)
Dagashi-ya
xyph : yep! the only one i haven't done yet is rinku~ (LOL)
and i kinda want to draw them again from time to time. maybe as practice or sometihng? (haha)
xyph
Gogo (gym) You have that freedom xD Make them do everyday things or some other forms of activity.
Dagashi-ya
thanks for the idea! i was kinda thinking what situations/poses should i put them in. defintiely gonna try that! xD
xyph
(p-rock)

Here's a really quick critique if you want.

left forearm looks too long and head looks small giving making her upper torso look big
Dagashi-ya
-for the left forearm: i kept fixing that a few times. the angle and the pose is really hard for me. i'll keep practicing on that one. (aha)
-for the head:ah! never noticed the head size. thanks for noticing that. (thinking)
xyph
- Do you have the reference pic used?
- np, once again Anime heads tend to be bigger than IRL heads.
Dagashi-ya
reference pic:
https://i.imgur.com/xwDmSAm.png
xyph
Ah I see. Seems in your drawing the left elbow is pointing toward the ground while the ref pic's elbow is facing forward. The left forearm ended up long due to distance between the hand and elbow in your drawing.

https://i.imgur.com/v7jt3wg.png https://i.imgur.com/ClV7IcI.png
Trace of the left arm.
Dagashi-ya
yep! it was hard try to do foreshortening and bending it at the same time. it took me several tries and i still can't manage to pull it off right. xD
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