[Students]
Someone's draft didn't make any sense, so I sent a polite "could I take a look at your outline?"
This is what they sent me.

That. Sure is an outline

I am not surprised that your paper made no sense though

I'm not angry, it's just very "oh bless your heart"

oh dear

Nice printing though

oh yes the handwriting is lovely

I can't talk, I never wrote outlines unless I had to

oh yeah I dont expect anyone to actually do them

it's just a polite way to be like "lmao see me"

I don't like to be like "this paper is kind of terrible" in text where people can misunderstand my tone

fair

I’d be impressed if any of mine took that detailed of notes. Though, tbh, im not sure I’ve broken it down for them that way, even.

lol if that's a set of notes it's not something they learned in my class I hate 5-paragraph structures

my guess is a coin flip between Google and high school

see I'd write that down somewhere I could reference it and then proceed to wing the paper in that rough form without the intermediate step of filling the outline in but I also have rampant adhd

when I don't do that, I either ramble for 5 pages without getting to any sort of point or I sit there like how do I write any amount at all on this topic that is so obvious to me that I could fit it into one sentence