NaNoWriMo: Captcha Check up to nearly 19,700 words tonight...

"The tension in the room could be cut with a knife: even their Grockldont escort that stood guard behind them shifted on their exoskeletal feet. The human soldiers swallowed for him. Barnes looked a little pale. As for Jim, he never faltered. He matched her glare with his trademark cool and calm eyes."

I am very proud of this part

Captcha Check This might be my best chapter/part yet

I... I don't know where this is coming from. I think this is good, and I don't know how

i'm actually kind of addled by it haha.

*I'm gonna laugh my ass off if you reach 50k before the 30th

AND SO PROUD

Captcha Check I don't think today's was as good. im not happy with this one

although it is riding after the one I thought was the best, so maybe it's in comparison

not sure. i need advice

It it transition-y?

what?

The last time you hate chapters it was because they were transition chapters. Bridges between action

yeah, you're right. this chapter was moving Marigold into the job, and setting up tension for later

the problem is, it had to be done

and telling is bad, but i had to do some telling

yeah see knew it

ehhhh

It can lie as is for now don't think it too much, the goal in NaNo is to keep going so you can always go back and edit later

that

is true and hard for me to remember

I LOVE YOU

Just enjoy yourself, you're at your best having fun

i am trying my best

You're doing great love <3