Shimarin
doodle:
morfonica's leader, tsukushi futaba~
https://i.imgur.com/sEV0eH3.png
xyph
The butterfly BG is a nice touch.

Reminds me to catch up watching Morfonica OVA.
Shimarin
thanks! i wasn't really planning on any backgrounds so that one was done quick~ xD
same here, i forgot to watch the second episode! (LOL)
xyph
I'll watch once I'm clear of some shows. Oh yeah, I think it's been a while but.. requesting critique xD
Shimarin

and oh, go ahead! critique please! (p-rock)
xyph
- left eye feels too small for a 3/4 view
- Thumb from right hand shouldn't be seen in that angle
fix:
https://i.imgur.com/Uocjg8v.jpeg
- Adjusted the face, necklace, head shape (a bit wider)
- Resized the eyes
- Removed the thumb

It's not much but a cute face alone can carry most of the impression.
Shimarin
-ah, no wonder the face felt a bit weird. (LOL)
-ah, i was using a model from designdoll. hmm...i guess i accidentally distorted the hand during posing. (aha)
https://images.plurk.com/4miVG1slQ1dhosFZJSexRf.png
-thanks for the head shape and the neck! she definitely feels more younger-looking now~
again, thanks for the corrections! these really helped! (p-rock)
xyph
- Ah I see, there's nothing wrong in the model. I think the way you drew it looked like most of the hand's top part is facing the viewer while the reference shows the side which is enough for the thumb to be seen.
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Shimarin
-ah, i see.
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