i'm just a girl, standing in front of a fight scene, trying to write it out the way i'm imagining it in my head....

I can never do this and I play such fighty characters lmfao it's a Problem™

yes i know i whinge about this once a week

IT REALLY IS

i play fighty assholes too

why I'm glossing over specific moves tbh

this is just me w every single tag doesn’t matter if fight scene or not

>_> I love writing fight scenes.

they're fun i'm just not very good at them so yea i kind of ... am a bit unspecific, i suppose

BTW, I was thinking for Maul and Kylo, they're pretty evenly matched but then Maul calls up his Omen and Kylo being thrown off guard by this creature with sharp teeth suddenly forming out of smoke from Maul's chest and attacking him gives Maul room to end it. Thoughts?

Sleepy sloth : oh yeah, yeah that's a good way for it to go -! gives them both room to show off their ability but kylo hasnt yet even figured out the omen so that would throw him for sure loool

that's why I usually try to plot out stuff with the other person so we can collectively write a neat fight scene rather than making each of us come up with things on our own that may or may not mesh

Heh, yep, Maul's not afraid to use whatever is at his disposal to win and he figures Kylo wouldn't know about Omens yet since he's a noob.

artist dolls help

whose limbs are where and such