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這篇描寫了我當時看完原劇之後感覺很可以延續的地方
也就是東植的原諒與自我救贖之旅已經透過拯救韓株元完成了
但韓株元並沒有
他要怎麼跟自己的過去還有那些內在的感情和解
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雖然開頭寫東植去服刑一年跟原劇有差異
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我喜歡作者描寫他們兩人相處時那種自然而然的感覺
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“I don’t think you’re ready for that conversation.” The playful glimmer seeps from his eyes. His voice lowers. “I shouldn’t have crossed the line.”
“You didn’t.”
“I did.”
“No, you didn’t. I came in with the intention—”
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The words catch in his throat.
He can’t say it.
He can’t admit it.
“It’s all right. I misjudged.” Dongsik gently pries his hand off. “Take time to think about what you want us to be, and once you know, we can talk.”
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“You’re—” He falters. Closes his eyes, contemplates. “You’re someone I don’t mind driving thirty minutes out to see. Someone whose calls I never miss and whose text I never ignore.” Is that enough?

“That’s pretty standard behavior—the calls and the texts.”
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“Not for me. It’s a bad habit.”

“I know.”

He turns the question back: “What am I to you, then?”

“Everything.”

Juwon opens his eyes.

Dongsik is no longer fidgeting.

“Everything?” he echoes, unsure if he heard correctly.
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“You’re my early mornings, my middays, and my late nights. Whatever I do, I can’t seem to get away from you.”

He makes a face. “As if you’re not the one inviting me over most of the time.”
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談到音樂對東植一家的意義跟沉默的部分也好好
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株元跑回去尋找母親的照片,然後找到母親留下的信的部分也是
很多很棒的細節
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Explanations and excuses sit on the tip of Juwon’s tongue, but he bites them back. Instead, he murmurs, “I didn’t realize.”

“Texting, calling—you could’ve done either, but you chose not to.”

“I didn’t think it would—”

“Bother me?” He gives him a short smile. “You’re right. If I didn’t like you as much, maybe I wouldn’t have cared.”
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“But you do,” Juwon says quietly.

“But I do,” Dongsik echoes.
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想到我寫的第一篇怪物同人
我有試圖把它翻成英文(因為那時真的太寂寞ㄏㄏ)
不過po了1/3就暫時擱置了
用英文寫作真的完全是另一回事QQ
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例如"由愛故生怖"怎麼翻成美麗的英文辣QQ
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