p/nxkn80

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:09 PM

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I need everyone’s help and eyeballs, please! I’m tying to pick a font treatment for my graphic novel pitch...images below!

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:10 PM

fermentingbones whipped up some graphic design for logo treatment for me and I like them all and wanted to get some other feedback on them! The image is not 100% final but it’s mostly what it’s going to look like

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:10 PM

Option A:

https://images.plurk.com/6ZtVauARzQqwrPvN4KzLWY.png

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:11 PM

Option B:

https://images.plurk.com/3UJI0Wt8k49uIYReAMe89j.png

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:11 PM

Option C:

https://images.plurk.com/5rl5QzUsPXgOFdEBCCa71N.png

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:11 PM

Option D:

https://images.plurk.com/7J5F15y66MlJHwNRIklRrS.png

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:11 PM

Presented in no order

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:12 PM

For context this is for a mock cover proposal, so imagine you’re looking at a book cover. What version do you like best?

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:14 PM

I prefer A or C, though with C that I think the solid red circle on C is a little too heavy and if it were outlined like the text it would be more cohesive without loosing the color emphasis.

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:15 PM

I also like D but it feels a little small compared to the amount of space around it? I like the stacked title since it fits nicely in that space

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:15 PM

Oh I just noticed the title on C is different, was that intentional?

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:16 PM

Yes but it might have to change....I’ve been going back and forth on “the” or not and l think I prefer no the

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:17 PM

Also thank you! That’s REALLY helpful feedback

decaf coffee

@hydok

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:19 PM

I like A the best, i like how the text stands out, the text on D feels a little small to me

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:19 PM

Happy to help, this is looking awesome!!

Mothman

@blackskymetro

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:19 PM

I really like the font for A best, it's really eye catching

decaf coffee

@hydok

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:20 PM

but the font on B is really cool...

Peil Wiggler

@Awkwardpossum

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:22 PM

I really like A

Peil Wiggler

@Awkwardpossum

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:22 PM

also like it without the "the"

Peil Wiggler

@Awkwardpossum

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:22 PM

also this looks fuckin awesome

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:27 PM

https://images.plurk.com/2MN2zoN05VLgmOpVdFdPSZ.png

What would you think about using the lightest color in your illustration instead of the white? I love the contrast but it feels really stark, especially with the heavier type treatments.

[[BIG SHOT]]

@Skree

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:28 PM

A or B, with a preference for A. Easier to read, and it's very stark in comparison to the heavy detail in the picture, which works nicely.

[[BIG SHOT]]

@Skree

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:29 PM

GORGEOUS art too

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:42 PM

THANK U GUYS

🐅 its harry

@ormery

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:42 PM

i agree w lex!

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:43 PM

Definitely leaning toward A which seems like a lot of people are as well

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:43 PM

I feel like they all have their pros and cons but I want whatever grabs the eye best without too much thought

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:43 PM

We are still gonna make some little tweaks based on what people are feeling so this is all good

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:46 PM

https://images.plurk.com/68O1dLxxTrooVaOcAiu9Sg.png

https://images.plurk.com/410SqUX6K3CuqhhKmXqa5I.png

boodle boy

@Nonvieta

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:46 PM

Looking gooood

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:47 PM

OH I love that second one!!!

Falcon McRaven

@talianora

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:48 PM

The plants in front of the frame is extremely good!

🐅 its harry

@ormery

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:49 PM

oOooh

fermentingbones

@safelybeds

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:51 PM

I;m here I'm implementing changes as we go -- lex, really love the Lightest Color suggestion! It's not final art so i'm not 100% sure what colors will be, but i'm gonna use that!

fermentingbones

@safelybeds

Sat, Jul 25, 2020 11:51 PM