Shroud of Sorrow ctd.

This would be so much better if they narrowed the scope

stop making things effect the whole damned world

even the show keeps it to a few locals

esp. in a book that's not even 300 pages

and eh so

the Doctor is dressed up as the Brig for reasons

and it's funny but at the same time it's very Moffat-y

like HEY LOOK A REFERENCE ISN'T THAT COOL WE GET YOU CLASSIC WHO

no if you got it you would put Briggy in or at least make it more than a one shot cameo for shits and giggles

and ofc the military personell are cartoons

yeah

I mean I guess there was a point to him being the Brig so that they could call his bluff and in a better story I wouldn't have minded but this story sucks and so I do