HMD For Tonje (Danny and Mick)

Feel free to tell me anything

In non-rp but also affecting it land I've been given more responsibilities at work and I am trying to deal with that

You are awesome! I love both Danny and Mick.

Your tags seem to be meatier lately, and I'm not sure if that's b/c Mick and Danny (Danny esp) are easier for you to write that way, but either way I'm liking it!

One suggestion would be that you might want to pay more attention to using contractions in dialogue, though? It's not huge or anything, but sometimes your guys come off as oddly formal in speech because you use 'I am' or 'I would' or 'I had' where people would almost always use 'I'm' or 'I'd' and similar things.

You know that is not something I have thought much about so that is a good suggestion. I think it might be one of those ESL things, but I'll try to do it more and see if things flow better with more contractions. Thank you