anon for redscribbles- Should I stay in the wake? I want to.

No one can decide that but you.

Pisces45- I want to stay but people really think I'm doing everything bad on my character.

i'd like to know why you think that. I've seen you receive some polite critique on the HMD and on plurk, but I haven't seen anyone saying they flat out don't want to play with you. Critique is meant to help you

It's mostly formatting for me. It's hard to differentiate where internal monologue, exposition, and dialogue is. It also feels like narrative slow is one of your weaknesses.

*flow. Now slow

*not slow

I can't type today. But all of those critiques are fixable. Just takes practice.

if you want to stay, you should and keep working on the things that have been pointed out to you. but getting frustrated by it and giving up won't endear you to anyone

If the formatting is the issue, not your characterization or the game's setting, leaving Wake won't help fix the problem.

the best you can do is take in consideration what is brought up in the HMD and try to figure out the formatting issue

pay attention to how other players do it, perhaps that can help?

and please, if people tag your post, tag them back. Otherwise, no one will tags you eventually because it feels like the CR is going nowhere

Don't take crit as if people do timeout character. Especially if it's just a formatting issue. If it's formatting it just takes practice to resolve.

..ER.. Hate the character . Thx spellcheck!

I'm going to go back and reply to posts now, I feel bad i don't remember old posts.

I had my dreamwidth inbox set up to hold all replies to me. there also isn't any harm and saying "who have I not tagged?"

it's just detaily things really. take your time and look over some other people's postings and translate it back into your own rping style

I use email notifications as well. Then I can just clear the inbox and use it as a reminder of who to tag.

we all want you to enjoy rping. no one here has said for you to stop, just keep improving the skills you have.

Thank you worm. I appreciate it.

Thank you for the nice tips everyone