Name a canon with Hella Issues and I'll ramble about what I'd do to fix it
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Name a canon with Hella Issues and I'll ramble about what I'd do to fix it
Name a canon with Hella Issues and I'll ramble about what I'd do to fix it
Gabiluzbad
Can you think of anything I missed for AgK?
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oh boy do I ever
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honestly a lot of this is going to be petty
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like, give Sheele, Bulat, and Chelsea a bit more time building emotional connections and participating in things before they get one slice of narrative hyperfocus and then killed off
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Leone looks like she's going to go out like she does in the anime
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e.g. stupid
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like, at least build up foreshadowing re: why splitting up is less bad an idea than not doing it?
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more world building in general, like, we don't even have any emotional investment in the guys akame's going after right now, they're just kinda there
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I'm not even going to touch the fucking robot
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maybe explain some shit about the outer countries, give us an arc or two in there so we're invested in the outcome of the army clash idk
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there's a pretty bad sense of scale in many respects
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what the hell's up with half the official merch being esdeath bikini foot fetish art
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I honestly do wanna know more about Tatsumi's childhood, I know he's a harem protagonist but he's way too fuckin' blank slate
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basically, was he an orphan or not, this seems like something we should know about the main viewpoint character
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ok so anyway aside from the excessive rape which eric already covered - ok I mean one thing I do appreciate is that they don't use it as a saucy threat against the female characters
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looking at you SAO
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but there is a tasteless amount of it and that bonus chapter with, like, the eyeball thing and the fucking dog that was way excessive
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my main issue is pretty much the very sketchy world building outlines, it worked when it was early on
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but at this point it reads like they're writing it off a checklist, ok I want this this and that to happen, I'll sloppily write it and then mark it off in haste
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and takahiro burned through too many named characters at once so now he's throwing more in at the last minute because now he needs someone to do xyz and it feels very forced
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so tl;dr more planning
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also show bulat's face more because I want more icons and he's got the helmet on half the time
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^ Caveat: Bulat's face more but drawn during the time period of the Better Art because some of the early ones are asspains to color which is why you don't have many of those
𝖒𝖆𝖒𝖆 𝖜𝖎𝖙𝖈𝖍
I still have them in my files and every now and again I look at them like
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Not hot enough sorry
𝖒𝖆𝖒𝖆 𝖜𝖎𝖙𝖈𝖍
I can't fix this
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/slides back out
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yyyyep
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just straight up give me a Bulat prequel
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fuck, duo pointed out that the biggest problem with the last arc is that it's not really
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assassination
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it's a full scale assault with a little bit of poorly done sneaking instead of assassins which is what the series is about
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yeah this sums up my problems the concepts of "assassination" plus "fight a giant robot in the middle of the city" is a very strong clash of tones
BF
FE
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which one?
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I haven't actually played Fates I just know about it second hand in virulent detail
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so I can't really have original opinions on it leseeeee
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ok awakening, it kinda laid the groundwork for some problems
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i have grouched at length about the every opposite sex pair needing a full support chain with marriage
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because ok it is admittedly great for the gameplay (in theory, because once you get to the gale force breeding you can sweep the final boss no matter who you're using it seems)
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but it absolutely wrecks the appeal supports had for me, where all of them kinda existed for a reason
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and brought out backstory bits and aspects of the character that wouldn't come out normally
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and here it's very quantity over quality
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let's say Awakening yeah
IT'S HALLOWEEN
Riddlesassins.
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and then extra first gen characters like the Khans and Tiki and so forth get fucked over because they get, like, one with the MC and maybe one other person and that is it
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I'd say for starters give everyone, like, a range of 6-8 other support conversations
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so you can have actual meaningful parent child chats
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yes this was my problem with awakening too
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and i think the reason why i didn't really get attached to any of the characters much
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god, I'm still pissed off at Cynthia-Henry which is the first kid I got
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their conversation being all "hey dad what if we appeared in the battlefield in a cloud of flower blossoms" "aw geez that's way too silly and weird kiddo"
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HENRY YOU LITERALLY INTRODUCED YOURSELF EXACTLY LIKE THAT
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BUT WITH CROWS??
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and I kinda lost inserts in supports after that
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also every man but Chrom and the extras being able to fuck Nowi is creepy
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just, like, revamp Nowi entirely
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make her look like she's at least on the right side of puberty
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maybe even keep the personality as an eccentricity and make her a grown woman
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give most of the lady armors actual armors in them
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i look at the sprites and all i can think is so many saddle sores
Frozen Time
Is there anything you'd change about Sailor Moon?
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Ehhh maybe like
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The whole romance plot where chino USA hides a talking horse in her room
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Autocorrect
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Pink hair
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And the horse is a teenage boy who watches her change
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And talks about what they have is a special secret and he will leave if she tells her legal guardians about him
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That's creepy man
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Maybe change the bit at the end of S where usagi beats up Uranus and Neptune
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Which was awesome but like - not really like anything she's done before or since and it doesn't fit
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Maybe swap around the power up pair episodes
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Since mako and Mina get slotted together both times
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We don't see much CR with Mina ami or mako rei
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Also bring back Rhett butler the fuckin
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Mystic demon cat boss
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I don't care in what capacity but do it
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For riddle assassins I'm gonna say make at least some of the deaths stick
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At least one of the RJ pair and Hanabusa
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It doesn't undermine the themes to have them die
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Also maybe don't have them literally kill each other off on stage
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That entire arc was bizarre
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Maybe explain what the fuck tokakus old prof was up to with the riddles
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What does he know
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As with agk some establishing of characters before they start getting pruned down would be nice