Though I'm still figuring out the 'bringing Dean back more than once' and what counts, because he brought Dean back from Mystery Spot, and he cures him from demon-ness.
Sam Winchester is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to.
He'd have to be pretty dense to miss the signs that he is destined for great things; he can hardly take a walk without tripping over a sword in a stone or a mysterious old woman wanting to tell his fortune.
He's had a rough life - to say the least! Angst? Histronics? His speciality. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever he gains, he's worked for.
You identify far too heavily with Sam Winchester, and defend him from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make him perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break.
Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one.
Max Rockatansky is only a little like you. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to.
In general, you care deeply about Katie, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization.
You may have let yourself get a little too close to Max Rockatansky. Maybe he's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like him and are trying to give him a free ride.
`Mirror, Mirror: Do I Know This Guy? 3 Beware the Monks of Cool: Yo! 13 'Tis Your Destiny: Plain Jane 0 Oh, the Trauma: Angst R Us 10 Momma Loves Me Best: Momma HATES Her! 0 Total: 26 `
Koala is nothing like you. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to.
In general, you care deeply about Koala, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization.
Sam Winchester was abandoned by his parents or guardians.Sometimes I switch viewpoints just so one of my characters can talk about how wonderful, brave, strong, and/or sexually attractive Sam Winchester is.Sam Winchester is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to.He'd have to be pretty dense to miss the signs that he is destined for great things; he can hardly take a walk without tripping over a sword in a stone or a mysterious old woman wanting to tell his fortune.He's had a rough life - to say the least! Angst? Histronics? His speciality. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever he gains, he's worked for.You identify far too heavily with Sam Winchester, and defend him from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make him perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break.Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one.Oh, the Trauma: Valium Poster Child 31I think everyone who reads this story will like and empathize with Max Rockatansky.Everyone except the bad guys thinks Max Rockatansky is hot.Even the bad guys think he's hot.WAGGLES EYEBROWSAnimals and children instinctively like Max Rockatansky.this is kinda true in his canon i guessMax Rockatansky is only a little like you. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to.He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to.He's had more than his fair share of hard knocks, and probably spends more time than he ought moaning about it. And he's gotten no slack from you.You may have let yourself get a little too close to Max Rockatansky. Maybe he's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like him and are trying to give him a free ride.Have some confidence in your writing! Max Rockatansky is a good character. Give him room to be himself before you stifle him.Oh, the Trauma: Angst R Us 12Momma Loves Me Best: Momma HATES Him! 0"Koala" is an object, adjective, or other word not commonly used as a name, like Stonefist or Chaos.Beware the Monks of Cool: Yo! 13
'Tis Your Destiny: Plain Jane 0
Oh, the Trauma: Angst R Us 10
Momma Loves Me Best: Momma HATES Her! 0
Total: 26 `
Koala is nothing like you. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to.There's never been anything special about her that she could see; boy, is she in for a surprise.She's had more than her fair share of hard knocks, and probably spends more time than she ought moaning about it. And she's gotten no slack from you.In general, you care deeply about Koala, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization.Koala is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of her.